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	<title>Comments on: Yea Me!  Revision Breakthrough</title>
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	<description>A writer in the suburban wilderness tackles pop culture, motherhood, MS, and life</description>
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		<title>By: Nicole</title>
		<link>http://kshoop.com/2005/09/03/yea-me-revision-breakthrough/comment-page-1/#comment-80</link>
		<dc:creator>Nicole</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Sep 2005 01:35:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>While sitting in our Reading/Language Pacing meeting, our topic turned to Writer&#039;s workshop for students.  Our mentor said that good writer&#039;s don&#039;t revise once, but many, many, many times.  I smiled and thought of YOU.  Niki</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>While sitting in our Reading/Language Pacing meeting, our topic turned to Writer&#8217;s workshop for students.  Our mentor said that good writer&#8217;s don&#8217;t revise once, but many, many, many times.  I smiled and thought of YOU.  Niki</p>
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		<title>By: Kathie</title>
		<link>http://kshoop.com/2005/09/03/yea-me-revision-breakthrough/comment-page-1/#comment-62</link>
		<dc:creator>Kathie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Sep 2005 00:25:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks so much to everyone for your support.  My posts have been terrible--almost non-existent--I just need to get through a little more before I&#039;m comfortable with how the revision is going.  Your words of encouragement are so helpful.

To Mindy--sorry that I mispelled your name--with an &quot;i.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks so much to everyone for your support.  My posts have been terrible&#8211;almost non-existent&#8211;I just need to get through a little more before I&#8217;m comfortable with how the revision is going.  Your words of encouragement are so helpful.</p>
<p>To Mindy&#8211;sorry that I mispelled your name&#8211;with an &#8220;i.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Jill</title>
		<link>http://kshoop.com/2005/09/03/yea-me-revision-breakthrough/comment-page-1/#comment-61</link>
		<dc:creator>Jill</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Sep 2005 21:39:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>YAY!  Good for you!  I absolutely know how you feel.  And I love your broken vase analogy -- that really captures it!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>YAY!  Good for you!  I absolutely know how you feel.  And I love your broken vase analogy &#8212; that really captures it!</p>
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		<title>By: Susan C.</title>
		<link>http://kshoop.com/2005/09/03/yea-me-revision-breakthrough/comment-page-1/#comment-60</link>
		<dc:creator>Susan C.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Sep 2005 21:18:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You are an inspiration to me!  Keep going on the revisions and the new book; they will be great and I can&#039;t wait to read the finished products.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You are an inspiration to me!  Keep going on the revisions and the new book; they will be great and I can&#8217;t wait to read the finished products.</p>
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		<title>By: beth</title>
		<link>http://kshoop.com/2005/09/03/yea-me-revision-breakthrough/comment-page-1/#comment-58</link>
		<dc:creator>beth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Sep 2005 16:19:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Kath,

Hang in there!! You are doing great!!

Hugs!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Kath,</p>
<p>Hang in there!! You are doing great!!</p>
<p>Hugs!</p>
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		<title>By: Mindy</title>
		<link>http://kshoop.com/2005/09/03/yea-me-revision-breakthrough/comment-page-1/#comment-53</link>
		<dc:creator>Mindy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Sep 2005 19:54:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>BUT! You have an agent! My mom is editing my first draft, because it started out with 1,200 pages.  *cough* She just handed me 350 pages of edits, so I know how you feel.

As soon as I have it down to a manageable size, I&#039;ll start shopping it. Congratulations!!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>BUT! You have an agent! My mom is editing my first draft, because it started out with 1,200 pages.  *cough* She just handed me 350 pages of edits, so I know how you feel.</p>
<p>As soon as I have it down to a manageable size, I&#8217;ll start shopping it. Congratulations!!</p>
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		<title>By: Kathie</title>
		<link>http://kshoop.com/2005/09/03/yea-me-revision-breakthrough/comment-page-1/#comment-49</link>
		<dc:creator>Kathie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 04 Sep 2005 12:21:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for caring about my book just about as much as I do...Lisa C--you&#039;re the best--</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for caring about my book just about as much as I do&#8230;Lisa C&#8211;you&#8217;re the best&#8211;</p>
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		<title>By: Cindy</title>
		<link>http://kshoop.com/2005/09/03/yea-me-revision-breakthrough/comment-page-1/#comment-48</link>
		<dc:creator>Cindy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Sep 2005 15:11:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Excellent! I&#039;m sure it&#039;s going to be great. Congratulations on taking the big step.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent! I&#8217;m sure it&#8217;s going to be great. Congratulations on taking the big step.</p>
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		<title>By: Lisa C.</title>
		<link>http://kshoop.com/2005/09/03/yea-me-revision-breakthrough/comment-page-1/#comment-47</link>
		<dc:creator>Lisa C.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Sep 2005 13:39:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good for you!  Can&#039;t wait to read the revisions...you did it!</description>
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